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Hard Cry

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Non specific cat crying hard. I used this to attempt "laying" cat ears and tear streaks as well as a strong expression and emotion. He looks absolutely miserable so I must have achieved my goal (I feel bad for putting him in such a state XD )
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

first thing i see is the 2 lines between the eyes they dont really need to be there

the nose on cats are more of a "T" shape

as for the ears they look great it would help to put a little bit more of a curve on the top line to them

the emotion is great too the only thing that i think would help is if the tufts of fur on his cheeks were curved down to help with the sadness of the pic

last thing is the hair i used to do the one little piece behind the ear too but i find it tends to look better when they aren't there unless u r drawing a female character but then u would draw the full head of hair